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dina54
12-28-2007, 12:38 AM
No limit to sign ups / Cards to me by April 1st

Gather 'round all you Goths and Goth wannabes and embrace the darkness!
Create a Deeply Depressing Poem using the Pat Pending Goth-O-Matic Poetry Generator at this site:
http://www.deadlounge.com/poetry/created.html
then illustrate it!
There are 5 categories with a variety of possibilities for each choice.
Make 3 separate poems/cards or 1 poem and 3 illustrations, your choice.
It would be great if you print out your masterpiece and either include it with the card or put it on the back.
USA residents include a SASE with 41 cent stamp
Non-USA just send an addressed label


(This is my first attempt at hosting here BTW)
1. dina54
2.TabLynn
3.Amerasu
4.(withdrawn:(
5.Anonevyl
6.Meran
7.(withdrawn :(
8.(withdrawn :(
9. KaHeD

TabLynn
12-28-2007, 01:20 AM
All right this sounds like just too much fun. I have already created my first poem! Sign me up!

dina54
12-28-2007, 03:08 PM
Welcome TabLynn.

dina54
12-29-2007, 11:51 AM
So what happened to all the nice folks who were interested in doing this?
doesn't anyone want to play anymore :( ?

Amerasu
01-02-2008, 01:25 AM
Sounds like fun. I'll join this one :)

dina54
01-02-2008, 01:30 AM
Yippee! Welcome Amerasu

Lagaz
01-09-2008, 12:32 PM
I'll join! Sing me up!

dina54
01-09-2008, 03:32 PM
Yippee!another victim...um...player

Anonevyl
01-09-2008, 04:10 PM
Dress me in black and call me Elvira - I am in.

dina54
01-09-2008, 04:35 PM
Dress me in black and call me Elvira - I am in.

Kewl! Welcome Elvira.

Anonevyl
01-09-2008, 04:53 PM
This is my poem - I put it here to preserve it.

"what have you wrought?
a black cloud of agony as memories darken.
once we savored wonder,
untainted and childlike,
but your desire perished.
a dark cloud of bitterness -
tears follow memory, follow night,
love forgotten.
in a storm of sorrow,
i still love you."

Fun, huh?

Meran
01-09-2008, 06:24 PM
I think I'm too depressed, nay, make that suicidal to live long enough to spread any visceral goo on paper... but then it would only be deserving of my legacy, that parts of my gizzard be left on others' doorsteps and consciences.
(sign me up please)
:cry:

dina54
01-09-2008, 06:26 PM
What a surprise....welcome Meran!

Meran
01-09-2008, 08:03 PM
You're so funny!
::D

Judithian
01-09-2008, 08:45 PM
You know... with such happy thoughts from Meran and Anonevyl, how can I resist? Sign me up and I'll go drain some blood and get ready to pen my prose!

dina54
01-09-2008, 09:29 PM
Welcome to our happy little family Judithian....

dina54
01-13-2008, 07:13 PM
the blackest gift

It is a night of sorrow, a song of ethereal pain,
wolves vent their loneliness. The eternal one
awakes.

Wisps of death shrouds her gaunt form,
a lurking agony.

Her midnight hair cascades over
pale and delicate shoulders, and her
full blood red lips part slightly, to taste the
life streaming from the
pale flesh beneath
her.

Now a night of ecstasy,
I awaken.

Meran
01-13-2008, 07:41 PM
So, you're going for one card per poem?
Oh! Oh!
We're going to INCLUDE the poem with the card, right?
I'm not working on this yet; it's still percolating.... but the coffee should be rich and dark when it's done.

TabLynn
01-13-2008, 07:58 PM
This is my poem. I think I'll do a different one for each card.

Remembrance of My Death

Around, all around, the dark memories gather.
My dread grows as the angry hand of Heaven falls against my naked soul.
It crushes me, and darkly my
blood drips
to the cold, uncaring tombstones.
In numbness I fall limply
while Death's shadow laughs cruelly.
Now alone, my cascade of tears falls upon dead eyes.

This is my Hell

dina54
01-13-2008, 08:45 PM
So, you're going for one card per poem?
Oh! Oh!
We're going to INCLUDE the poem with the card, right?
I'm not working on this yet; it's still percolating.... but the coffee should be rich and dark when it's done.

Yea, I did 3 poems. The other 2 cards are in my gallery. I'm going to print them out in an eetsy weentsy font, and put them on the card backs.

altermyworld
01-14-2008, 01:28 AM
What an interesting swap, include me please.
ANg

TabLynn
01-14-2008, 02:20 AM
I'm thinking I'll just do a companion card with the poem on it. I put a bunch of info on my card backs so the poem would be in 3 point type. Hard to read.

dina54
01-14-2008, 05:21 AM
Altermyworld, welcome to our Deeply Depressing Swap...:eek:

altermyworld
01-14-2008, 05:40 AM
TabLynn why don't you make a card that is 5x3 1/2. fold in half to make the 2 1/2 x 31/2 and put the poem in the inside. At least thats what i intend to do.
LOL DDS. Hmmm?
Ang

TabLynn
01-14-2008, 02:45 PM
that's a great idea altermyworld. sometimes I just don't think too far out of the box:twitcy:

altermyworld
01-14-2008, 04:20 PM
I love interactive cards!!!!! And this swap :)
ANg

dina54
02-02-2008, 02:01 PM
I just thought I would bump up this thread and see if there are any more would-be goth grrrlz (or boyz!) out there

TabLynn
02-11-2008, 07:34 PM
I have finished my first card! Struggled a bit but finally got it done. I still haven't figured out exactly how I am going to incorporate the poem. I worked up my second and third poems now just to get the cards going!

Judithian
02-11-2008, 08:04 PM
That rocks! She looks so sad.

dina54
02-11-2008, 09:02 PM
That is a great card! I'm going to want to keep ALL these cards for myself!!!

TabLynn
02-12-2008, 07:06 PM
Here is poem 2. And the card.

Night Ritual

Around, all around, the sinister creatures gather.
My dread grows as an avenging sword falls against my neck.
It severs me, and darkly my essence drips to the barren land.
In agony I fall limply while death hovers close.
Now alone, my cascade of tears falls upon darkened eyes.
This is because of you

dina54
02-12-2008, 07:12 PM
All I can say is ...whoa.

Judithian
02-12-2008, 07:14 PM
I love the ghoulish golems in the back. Awesome (errr, I mean, Depressing)!

TabLynn
02-13-2008, 02:23 AM
last one. here's the poem

Eternal

It is a night of dark desire, a song of death, wolves vent their howls.
The ethereal one rises.
Curling wisps of death shrouds her pale form, an eternal wrath.
Her midnight hair cascades over pale and delicate shoulders,
and her full scarlet lips part slightly,
to taste the blood streaming from the pale flesh beneath her.
Now a night of ecstasy, I remember her.

TabLynn
02-13-2008, 08:00 PM
One for our host! Poem title "consumed", but I can't find the words. I created a double folding sort of card for all of these so when you open it up the poem is next to the illustration. Card info is one the inside/back.

dina54
02-13-2008, 09:19 PM
One for our host! Poem title "consumed", but I can't find the words. I created a double folding sort of card for all of these so when you open it up the poem is next to the illustration. Card info is one the inside/back.

OMG! I love her, in a deeply depressing way of course.

dina54
02-19-2008, 07:40 PM
Tablynn, your fantastic cards arrived today and I love them all. Thanks so much for the extra! I'll try not to look too happy.....

KaHeD
02-23-2008, 12:01 AM
I always loved Edgar Allen Poe-ms so this should be fun. Will you sign me up?

KaHeD
02-23-2008, 12:03 AM
I've just signed on here - if you want to visit some of my ATCs you can visit ATCsforall.com or my homepage at www.angelfire.com/ma/pondart - there's an ATC gallery of all of my cards there! But I haven't put in my personal page here yet.

dina54
02-23-2008, 04:07 AM
I always loved Edgar Allen Poe-ms so this should be fun. Will you sign me up?

Welcome KaHeD!

KaHeD
02-23-2008, 01:17 PM
Yay! Thank you. Oops - too cheerful - in my darkest dreams I could not imagine being permitted to slither into this swap - how's that??? ;)

dina54
02-23-2008, 05:49 PM
Yay! Thank you. Oops - too cheerful - in my darkest dreams I could not imagine being permitted to slither into this swap - how's that??? ;)

Much better....one must learn to control one's enthusiasm

TabLynn
03-06-2008, 10:33 PM
A bit off subject but maybe relevant. Bauhaus has a new album out called Go Away White.

Anonevyl
03-06-2008, 10:58 PM
Sweet!!!! I love them....

Daniel Ash is just too freakin' sexy for words...

dina54
03-10-2008, 09:06 PM
Just bumping this up...

Judithian
03-15-2008, 07:02 PM
Dina - It is with much sadness and gloom that I must resign from this most sad swap. Us sickly ones just don't have the energy and must simply lie down and wane away.

But I do (almost) look for the dawning of a new day when all the gloomy dark gothic images are shared amongst the dead.

So very sorry.

dina54
03-16-2008, 03:59 AM
Dina - It is with much sadness and gloom that I must resign from this most sad swap. Us sickly ones just don't have the energy and must simply lie down and wane away.

But I do (almost) look for the dawning of a new day when all the gloomy dark gothic images are shared amongst the dead.

So very sorry.

Whoa, no problem....

KaHeD
03-17-2008, 07:16 PM
however, here is one full poem and its illustration (at least I hope it's attached):

Around, all around, the sinister creatures gather.
My dread grows as doom's scythe falls against my naked soul.
It smites me, and darkly
my essence drips
to the barren land.
In a strange and terrible glee I flail madly
while the Reaper takes my hand.
Now alone, my fervent plea falls upon blind eyes.

This is my doom.

(In memory of Edgar Allen Poe . . .)

Meran
03-17-2008, 08:38 PM
KaHeD, what an interesting card! In so many ways. Looks like it was quite a bit of work, also.

dina54
03-20-2008, 12:30 AM
KaHeD your delightfully depressing cards are here. Thanks for the cool Purple Haze paper!

Amerasu
03-25-2008, 10:57 PM
Dina, mine are going out tomorrow. I'm finishing them up tonight.

Anonevyl
03-25-2008, 11:24 PM
As soon as someone gives me your addy my cards are ready to go.

dina54
03-26-2008, 07:54 AM
Anne, I've PM'd you
Sal I will be on the Lookout!
BTW, we have had 2 withdrawals, that leaves 7 of us; this is like one of those old, mysterious films where everyone is locked in a spooky castle overnight and they start disappearing one by one....sort of.

KaHeD
03-26-2008, 06:20 PM
Too bad about the 'vanishings' - there are some nifty artists left, though!!!

Anonevyl
03-26-2008, 06:58 PM
I'm so excited....:dull:

Anonevyl
03-26-2008, 06:58 PM
No seriously, I am.

Meran
03-27-2008, 11:55 PM
My poorly thoughtout and painted cards would not want to dirty the USPS's bags with their presence. They'd be put in their Lost Letter bin, deservedly, if they didn't have your address to be dumped to instead.

dina54
03-28-2008, 02:58 AM
My poorly thoughtout and painted cards would not want to dirty the USPS's bags with their presence. They'd be put in their Lost Letter bin, deservedly, if they didn't have your address to be dumped to instead.

:huh: Does that mean you NEED my address?
Just in case, I PM'd you.....

altermyworld
03-28-2008, 06:23 PM
dina i have not completed or even started these there is no way i can complete please forgive me, i am a poor member right now, withdrawing from swaps. blah.
Ang

dina54
03-28-2008, 07:22 PM
dina i have not completed or even started these there is no way i can complete please forgive me, i am a poor member right now, withdrawing from swaps. blah.
Ang

and then there were six..........:shocked:

TabLynn
03-28-2008, 09:45 PM
There was a movie called Ten Little Indians where the people disappeared one by one. I always loved that movie, although I haven't seen it in ages.

Meran
03-28-2008, 10:35 PM
Mine were sent today.
btw, you didn't drop out of mine, so I made sure not to drop out of yours.. working on my own swap cards today. See how important you are?
I've noticed that drop outs happen a lot whenever chunky pages are coming due... tho yes, not all the players are in one, but it's still a true fact. hmm....

Meran
03-29-2008, 04:59 AM
We still have a couple people to hear from. BUT all who have sent the pms have been okay fine with letting in MMDM to a group.. I'm waiting for just a few more. If there had been one full group to check in, I would put her in that group... come on players.. answer those pms!

dina54
03-29-2008, 07:59 PM
We still have a couple people to hear from. BUT all who have sent the pms have been okay fine with letting in MMDM to a group.. I'm waiting for just a few more. If there had been one full group to check in, I would put her in that group... come on players.. answer those pms!

:huh: I suspect this was posted in the wrong thread?

Anonevyl's darkly depressing (but in a wonderful way) cards are here. I will cherish the extra card until my dying day.....

Meran
03-29-2008, 09:18 PM
oops. wrong thread was up.. so sorry!

dina54
03-30-2008, 07:04 AM
The cards so far are great! Too bad there aren't more of us. I would like to do a swap gallery. Since you need 12 pics, do you think a gallery with 2 cards from each participant would be OK?

TabLynn
03-30-2008, 12:48 PM
works for me.

altermyworld
03-30-2008, 07:06 PM
Thanks for the understanding. :)
ANg

Meran
03-30-2008, 11:26 PM
am going to post mine shortly. I didn't copy the poems for here, they're with the cards, so it's kinda hard to see why my images may appear as they do. I apologize.. wish I'd saved them myself.

dina54
03-31-2008, 08:24 PM
Meran, your cards are here and I have PM'd the poems to you.
As soon as Amersu's cards arrive I will scan all the cards for the swap gallery and get them in the mail!

Meran
04-01-2008, 12:42 AM
thanks so much Dina, that was work for you, I know!
if anyone would like to know why I did what for each poem, I'd be happy to explain.. James was flubbergusted over them.. (trans. did NOT understand WHY...)
lol
at least he wasn't the cause! ;)

dina54
04-01-2008, 07:26 PM
Amerasu's cards are here! Now I just need to scan the cards for a swap gallery and I'll mail them out. Does anyone know how many dpis to scan at? I'm going to send the scans to someone to make the gallery as i have no idea how to do it.:huh:

dina54
04-02-2008, 05:33 PM
I have scanned 2 cards from each participant and sent them to Amerasu for a swap gallery. These cards will go out in today's mail.
Thanks for playing in my first ever IATCs swap everyone!

Meran
04-02-2008, 09:52 PM
Your first swap?? aw, you should have said!
Anyway, it was a hard one for me, but I'm glad I didn't have to ditch.. :D

dina54
04-02-2008, 09:59 PM
Your first swap?? aw, you should have said!
Anyway, it was a hard one for me, but I'm glad I didn't have to ditch.. :D

Well gee, thanks...
I really thought you did a fantastic job on your cards. SO, how about heading over to AFA and joining my Nerd Pride swap :D

KaHeD
04-03-2008, 06:30 PM
Received 3 great cards today! Will be back later to do host and rep points and say more but must dash now!

TabLynn
04-04-2008, 10:30 PM
Yay! I got my cards today (pardon my excitement). All three, from Amerasu, KaHeD, and Dina, were beautiful:) What a lot of fun this swap was!